I'm not alright.... people so often forget that because other's give advice and
LOOK like they are ok that everything's fine. I'm better yet not, shit's fixed
but worse, nothing changes only morphs into something else... I think I see
something... change needs to have a drastic effect.... something really
drastic... a fork in the road so to speak... the path never changes unless you
take a different route... geh... it just takes a while for this ol saiya to
figure out... ^__^
Your comment doesn't make me feel any confident about the actual state you might
be at the moment. I hope you will be ok. Then again is not like I'm ok always,
one minute im here the other I might be ten feet underground. I'm just glad you
posted back which means there's a posibility that you might still be alive at
least as I am at the moment. But tomorow...who knows.
*hugs*
That's just in case you dissapear for a whole century.
I draw my readers close, is a reflection of how i am in real life. I like the
attention the glory...how vain I am ^^ But I like people to see close to my
"skin" in this case writting.
If I lost my touch you would have figure this on your first attempt. I never
said Sazriel found out its meaning. I just stated that he was closer to its
meaning than you where with that menstrual shit you mentioned...yuck.
**But this time you caught me, it is about vampires indeed. At the end I just
added a little dark romance.**
Is a very dark poem, specially if you read it carefully with a dark background
instrumental music.
Hey, btw you never said anything about the vocabulary I used in it. Was it
sophisticated enough for your taste?
P.S. Is JOnO that busy he can't even make a quick post here?
I can't believe Sazriel's way closer than you. But forgeting about its meaning I
just wanted to hear how'd it made my readers feel when it was read by them.
Can we discuss this somewhere else? Btw how's your story going. I think you had
a crew working for you.
P.S. I already heard your interpretation on my poem. Now, could I have your
opinion about the words I used on it and also, how it made you feel while
reading it. What images whent through that naughty mind of yours.
*I watch several horror movies before writing it.*
I curse the Gods for uncertain views
of repeated faces over others
how unfair to pick on innocents
their rage must fetch revenge.
Remember theyâre ghostly
turning around roughly cold
to grip your neck and rip it apart
ready to chase you in your sleep.
Iâm just another ghost
in the ghostly world of yours
lurking the darkness for some light
searching for plays and comebacks.
Is a fading laugh
towards a crying one
a give and get of oneself
the very lying truth I convey.
well ... putting it like that i wouldn't mind at all, but not in texas!
depends where you live ^^
Thanks (hitomi) is not exacly about the movie but when I thought about a title that one seem to fit perfectly.
light is soft
hard the total opposite...
what the hell got into you man?
you must be smocking or something, we can share ^^
otherwise, snickers... don't let the hunger attack
if i like the color and the shape...lol
damn you (jk), i wrote to you, not really that long since then and you use your time only for this thread?
Your comment doesn't make me feel any confident about the actual state you might be at the moment. I hope you will be ok. Then again is not like I'm ok always, one minute im here the other I might be ten feet underground. I'm just glad you posted back which means there's a posibility that you might still be alive at least as I am at the moment. But tomorow...who knows.
*hugs*
That's just in case you dissapear for a whole century.
*hides behind j0n0*
*whispers* "i second that"
*walks slowly behind jasaijayin and pokes and runs*
merged: 09-11-2006 ~ 05:24am
*hides behind j0n0*
*whispers* "i second that"
*walks slowly behind jasaijayin and pokes and runs*
thanx guys
poem talks luv
"Escaflowne"
Slipping by the crimson
liquid drops
past my sight
and a path ahead.
I trip and fall
trying to take hold
of them floating hearts
with my foolish hands.
I trip and fall
colliding unconscious
snapping my thoughts
half exposed.
stiff thoughts
drip over talks
filtrating through holes
of your brain console.
I reach to the stars
without looking down
but my legs aim on
forever down the abyss.
P. S. What can I say, hope you get entertained for a while with pieces of me. Bye
I know zerodegress and alisha, but i seriously think that falling in love over the internet is rather painful...
who won, if I may know?
I draw my readers close, is a reflection of how i am in real life. I like the attention the glory...how vain I am ^^ But I like people to see close to my "skin" in this case writting.
Me Sazriel, me >.>
If I lost my touch you would have figure this on your first attempt. I never said Sazriel found out its meaning. I just stated that he was closer to its meaning than you where with that menstrual shit you mentioned...yuck.
**But this time you caught me, it is about vampires indeed. At the end I just added a little dark romance.**
Is a very dark poem, specially if you read it carefully with a dark background instrumental music.
Hey, btw you never said anything about the vocabulary I used in it. Was it sophisticated enough for your taste?
P.S. Is JOnO that busy he can't even make a quick post here?
I can't believe Sazriel's way closer than you. But forgeting about its meaning I just wanted to hear how'd it made my readers feel when it was read by them.
Can we discuss this somewhere else? Btw how's your story going. I think you had a crew working for you.
P.S. I already heard your interpretation on my poem. Now, could I have your opinion about the words I used on it and also, how it made you feel while reading it. What images whent through that naughty mind of yours.
*I watch several horror movies before writing it.*
That is if you're ever serious....*coughs*
1. It depends.
2. It depends
*no comments*
doesn't deserve one-------->jasaiyajin
YOu like it? What do you think it's about?
Arising strings of splenetic laces
revolve around them gardens
before sun rises.
It hunts to see them
...turn around
leaving its poised expression
caressing sensitive pulsations.
A delusion awakes
creeping over vexing hands
wielding them decisively
deep inside open wounds.
Rely halting inhales
on my soul.
Clone pentagram omens
engraved across your inner cores.
thanks for sharing
*goes alone to rob and makes Ocean 13 the new version*
Chickens!